The stream in the ravine

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1. Each one of those places that she say's describes the outside everything she loved about it.
2. She starts off by giving background information, and then goes into detail on all of her visits and the action that she encounters. then she shares her personal importance to the stream. Then she wraps it all up with her wanting to go back in time. I think the strategy the writer used was trying make it relatable to the audience, and I thought it was very effective.
3. The photo shows the father, the daughter, and their bridge. She wants her parents to be back together so they can be a family and share more happy memories like that.
4. The tone is differnet because the stream for her now brings back sadness of her family, when she was little it was everything to her but now she doesn't want to ever go back.