Reading for Better Writing
- The writer introduces the topic by explaining how shw tells the lady who she is and then 5 minutes later she forgets, this is because of her dementia. This to me is effective because it caught my attention.
- In paragraph 5 it states that dementia is a broad term that refers to a number of health problems along with Alzheimer's disease, brain tumors, arteriosclerosis, & hardening of arteries. All of these have to do with memory loss.
- She goes into detail that people with dementia express strange beliefs or fears, and that they have diminished language skills. She goes more into detail about their behavorial changes, I find them effective because she gave alot of information which kept me intrigued.
- I think that the closing is fitting because since there is no cure we must give hem patience, kindness, and love.
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