Reading for better writing
- Her personal anecdote strengthens the essay because it catches your attention. In the beginning he is a young child trying to cure cancer, and then at the end he is na adult still trying it really makes you sympathize.
- I think that it helps clarify the subject because each grandparent had a different kind of cancer and because of them getting them thats why she decided to spend her time coming up with a cure.
- In paragraph 9, yes because he is comparing the 2 cancers his grandparents had.
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